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            Once upon a time in a kingdom, long since forgotten, an Archangel fell in love with a human, creating the first forbidden love. Their passion for one another sparked a feud between brothers, but it also brought about the first child ever born, a Prince.
As war began in the second Heaven, Samael dutifully served his creator, but mostly he fought to keep his secret love safe. His own brother, Lucifer took up an army of angels against him. Their creator, Elohim, stepped in and cast Lucifer down. Elohim forbid Lucifer and his followers to never leave the sanctity of the second heaven for their betrayal. For loving outside of his kind and producing the first child, Elohim took away Samael’s right to procreate by castrating him.
                Fearing for the humans Elohim created the third heaven, a Garden of Eden. It was there Elohim formed humankind. Unable to travel into the third heaven without his love, Samael asked Elohim to bestow upon Lilith Lucifer’s forbidden powers. Being the first mother, Elohim granted her the powers, but only with the exception she gives up her spot beside Samael and her son. Lilith and Samael’s only son, the First-Borne Prince of the second heaven must also dwell in the fifth heaven under his father’s rule, giving up his right to the throne in the second heaven.
                Unwilling to accept Elohim’s rules she agrees, until she receives the Fallen Prince’s powers. As the first made witch, Lilith casts a spell upon her son, allowing him to take his throne once he finds his Queen. After cunning the sons of Elohim to lay with the daughters of men, creating more like her son, she then blessed one soul incapable of dying. A soul having all the powers matching her son’s would be placed into the body of a descendant of a Nephilim.  Thus, the phoenix was born.
After Elohim discovered her plot against his will, their battles grew larger, relinquishing its fury frequently into all the heavens. Thus Lilith stood against Elohim and was severely punished every time. Each time the Phoenix came closer to her son, Elohim would create another barrier preventing them from being together. Elohim placed in front of the Phoenix a set of trials that she must complete before being allowed to live or love her Prince of the second heaven.
Now as we enter into the fifth heaven and approach the fate of the Phoenix, we must understand the hardships Elohim has placed upon her soul. The Phoenix will die as the body dies, but her soul will then be once more reincarnated into a newborn descendant of the Nephilim. Unlike other descendants, the Phoenix’s powers will continue to lie reasonably dormant until two hundred full moons have risen. It will then be on that two hundredth full moon, she will truly begin to gain her full powers, but her ascension into the true Phoenix comes with the price of seeing her fatal end. After her ascension she will either seek out her own death to stop the demise of her fate or she will lose control over her own growing powers killing herself as well as those around her.



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  1. Mixed reactions from my perspective. I think this holds the promises of a great story and could develop into such. however, I also find it much too conforming to the known story, the biblical story. I would suggest you take it from another angle, a bit further removed from the known story. I must also admit that I was drawn to this because I see some aspects of it is not unlike one of my own stories which I'm currently working on. I wish you well with this and other works. Note, pay attention to those spellings.

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